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Change the wording without losing the relationship
Choose a reading route, or follow the complete guide in order. Each chapter keeps the explanation connected to examples and use.
ROUTE 1 · CHAPTERS 1–4
Purpose, understanding, summary, paraphrase and quotation.
ROUTE 2 · CHAPTERS 5–8
Map and select the information
Meaning relationships, sample source, main proposition and relevance.
ROUTE 4 · CHAPTERS 13–16
Rebuild the expression faithfully
Structure, attribution, evaluation and compression.
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A source says an arrangement may change if a room is available. A shorter version says the arrangement has changed. The second is concise, but it is not faithful. Compression has removed the condition and changed a possibility into a confirmed event.
Summary selects the main information for a smaller account. Paraphrase restates a passage in new wording and structure while preserving its meaning. Both require understanding, judgement and attribution where another source supplies the ideas. Neither is simply replacing long words with short ones.
This guide follows Sources, Attribution and Verification. The draft notice used below is an original invented teaching source, not a real workshop announcement.
Full Chapter Index
Open a group to choose a chapter. The teaching chapters themselves remain expanded.
Choose the restatement job · Chapters 1–4
Map and select the information · Chapters 5–8
Protect the source’s limits · Chapters 9–12
Rebuild the expression faithfully · Chapters 13–16
Compare, verify and practise · Chapters 17–20
CHAPTER 1 OF 20 · Choose the restatement job
1. Identify the job of the restatement
A summary for a busy organiser may foreground unresolved action. A summary for a reading response may foreground the source’s argument. The purpose affects selection, but should not alter what the source actually says.
Ask what the reader needs from this account and what constraints the task sets. An assignment may specify a passage, length or format. Follow those requirements rather than applying an automatic rule to every text.
Selection is necessary; distortion is not. You may omit an incidental example if the main relationship remains intact. You should not omit a condition that determines whether the main claim is true.
Read for the central claim, supporting relationships, conditions and status. If a pronoun or term is unclear, resolve it before paraphrasing. A shorter misunderstanding remains a misunderstanding.
Try explaining the passage aloud without looking at individual words. This can reveal whether you understand the relationship or only recognise the vocabulary.
Then return to the source and check the account. Understanding is tested by correspondence with the actual text, not by how fluent your explanation sounds. A confident restatement can still swap participants or reverse a condition.
CHAPTER 3 OF 20 · Choose the restatement job
3. Summary and paraphrase operate at different scales
A summary reduces a larger passage to its main information. A paraphrase usually restates a selected passage more fully. The distinction concerns function as well as length.
A paraphrase can be similar in length to the original, especially when an unfamiliar idea needs clearer wording. It does not need to preserve every word or the original sentence order.
Do not assume that any short text is a good summary. A one-line account can omit the central relationship. Likewise, a long paraphrase can wander beyond the source. Check what job it performs and whether it preserves the intended information.
Quotation reproduces the source’s words, with appropriate marking and attribution. It is useful when the wording itself matters, such as a literary phrase or a distinction being inspected.
Paraphrase uses new wording, while summary selects a smaller account. A response can combine these methods, but their roles should be visible to the reader.
Do not place quotation marks around wording you have silently changed. Do not present distinctive copied phrasing as your own paraphrase. Keep notes that separate exact quotation, restatement and your own comment so their origins remain recoverable.
CHAPTER 5 OF 20 · Map and select the information
5. Map the information that must survive
Identify who does what, to which object, when, under which conditions and with what certainty. These relationships form a practical meaning map for the passage.
In a proposal, status may be central. In a causal explanation, the connection between cause and effect may be central. In a narrative summary, selected events and their order may carry the main development.
Do not preserve every descriptive detail at the expense of the key relationship. A summary can retain the room colour yet omit that its use remains unconfirmed. That account saves the wrong information for the task.
CHAPTER 6 OF 20 · Map and select the information
6. Read the original teaching source
“The revised draft proposes moving the workshop to Room 4 on 18 October, provided that the room is available after three. Group A has been asked to check whether the later time creates a transport clash. No final booking has been confirmed. The organiser will issue a notice after these checks.”
The passage gives a proposal, two relevant checks, an unresolved booking status and a later communication step. It does not announce a completed move.
The date, room and group are invented anchors. They make the restatement test precise. Readers should practise preserving their relationships, not treat the paragraph as a current instruction to attend an actual workshop.
For the sample notice, the main arrangement is a proposed move whose feasibility remains under review. The room availability and transport check constrain it; the absence of confirmation matters directly.
“The organiser likes Room 4” is not the central proposition and is not stated. “A notice will be issued” is one next step, but does not alone convey the arrangement’s status.
Write the central proposition in plain words before adding selected details. This helps prevent a summary from becoming a list in which the most important relationship is no more visible than the incidental ones.
CHAPTER 8 OF 20 · Map and select the information
8. Select supporting information by relevance
If summarising the decision status, retain the conditions and lack of confirmation. If recording the next action, identify the checks and the notice that follows them.
The audience may already know the event date, but a durable stand-alone account may need it. Selection depends on the use and available context, not an automatic deletion of all dates and names.
Ask what misunderstanding would arise if a detail disappeared. If omitting “no final booking” makes the proposal sound settled, keep it. If omitting a decorative description changes nothing central, it may be safely removed for this purpose.
CHAPTER 9 OF 20 · Protect the source’s limits
9. Conditions carry logical boundaries
“Provided that the room is available after three” limits the proposed move. It cannot become “because the room is available” without evidence that the condition has been satisfied.
Similarly, “unless”, “only if” and “even if” express different relationships. A restatement must preserve the actual connection rather than use whichever connector sounds convenient.
Test the revised wording against a case in which the condition fails. Does it still describe the source accurately? If your version announces the move despite unavailable space, it has lost a necessary boundary.
“Proposes”, “may”, “could” and “has been confirmed” do not describe the same status. Removing a small modal expression can make the statement much stronger.
In the sample, “The workshop will move to Room 4” is not a faithful summary. The draft proposes the move and explicitly says the booking remains unconfirmed.
Use concise wording that carries the limit: “The draft proposes a conditional move, pending room and transport checks.” If the task needs the exact date and place, add them. Brevity should come from efficient structure, not erased uncertainty.
CHAPTER 11 OF 20 · Protect the source’s limits
11. Keep quantities and groups aligned
The sample says Group A has been asked to check a transport clash. It does not say every participant completed a check or every group has a clash.
Carry the named group and action status into the restatement where they matter. “Group A is checking transport implications” may still overstate if the source only says a request was sent and no checking has begun.
Distinguish requested, ongoing and completed actions. A faithful account may use “has been asked to check” even when that phrase is less compact. Precision can be necessary because the action’s stage determines the next step.
“No final booking has been confirmed” is central negative information. Omitting “no” reverses the claim; omitting the whole sentence may still create a misleading overall impression.
A contrast can also carry the main point: an arrangement is proposed, not settled. Preserve that relationship even if the original contains several sentences.
Do not flatten a passage into an unqualified positive message simply because that is easier to write. A summary should help the reader understand what is and is not established.
CHAPTER 13 OF 20 · Rebuild the expression faithfully
13. Reorganise rather than substitute word by word
A paraphrase can begin with status: “The workshop’s booking remains unconfirmed. The revised draft suggests Room 4 for 18 October if the room is available after three. Group A has been asked to check transport implications, and the organiser will send a notice after the checks.”
This version changes order and structure while preserving the source’s main relationships. It is one possible paraphrase, not a required model.
Replacing “revised” with “changed” and “proposes” with “suggests” in the original sentence alone is a much smaller transformation. Genuine restatement begins with understanding and a new construction, not a mechanical synonym search.
CHAPTER 14 OF 20 · Rebuild the expression faithfully
14. Attribution survives new wording
If a real source supplies the idea, changing the sentence does not make the idea your own discovery. Identify the origin through the form required by the task.
Attribution can also preserve source status: “The revised draft proposes…” is more informative than simply announcing the arrangement in the writer’s own voice.
Do not add a real institution’s name to the invented notice as though it issued it. Teaching sources should remain clearly labelled. Traceability is meaningful only when the stated origin is accurate.
CHAPTER 15 OF 20 · Rebuild the expression faithfully
15. Separate summary from evaluation
“The proposal remains conditional” summarises status. “The organiser should have checked the room earlier” evaluates a process. Both could appear in a response, but they perform different jobs.
Do not insert your judgement into the source’s position without signalling it. A reader should know where the source account ends and your assessment begins.
The distinction matters in literature too. A narrative summary reports selected events; an interpretation explains their significance. A task asking for one may not be answered by giving only the other.
CHAPTER 16 OF 20 · Rebuild the expression faithfully
16. Compress wording before deleting meaning
Remove repeated framing, redundant examples and phrases that do not carry necessary information. Combine related sentences where the relationship remains clear.
“At this point in time, a final booking has not yet been confirmed” can become “The booking remains unconfirmed.” The shorter sentence preserves status without retaining every phrase.
Avoid compression that makes reference unclear. “It remains unconfirmed” is shorter, but may fail if several proposals appear nearby. A useful summary balances economy with the information needed to recover its subject.
CHAPTER 17 OF 20 · Compare, verify and practise
17. Compare faithful and distorted accounts
| Restatement of the sample | What it preserves or changes | Assessment |
|---|---|---|
| The draft proposes a move pending room and transport checks. | Proposal and conditions | Useful brief summary for this focus |
| The workshop has moved to Room 4. | Changes proposal into completion | Distorted status |
| All participants have transport difficulties. | Enlarges group and invents a result | Unsupported |
| The booking is unconfirmed; a notice will follow the checks. | Status and next communication step | Useful for an action-focused account |
| The organiser carelessly changed the room. | Adds judgement and a completed change | Not a faithful summary |
A summary can select a focus, but it cannot invent the information needed to make that focus convenient. Check each version against the same original passage.
CHAPTER 18 OF 20 · Compare, verify and practise
18. Verify the restatement against the source
After drafting, compare participants, actions, objects, time, quantity, conditions, negation, certainty and attribution. Then ask whether the overall impression still matches the original.
Look for accidental strengthening: asked becomes completed, suggested becomes proved, some becomes all. Look also for missing relationships, such as a later notice depending on earlier checks.
For longer sources, keep a note of the passage locations supporting each part of the summary. This helps distinguish faithful selection from a remembered impression that the source does not actually support.
Task 1. Summarise the sample’s decision status in one sentence. Possible answer. “The revised draft proposes a move to Room 4, but room and transport checks remain necessary and the booking is unconfirmed.”
Task 2. Can “provided that” become “because” here? Answer. No. The original gives a condition, not a verified cause or satisfied fact.
Task 3. Does paraphrase remove the need for attribution to a real source? Answer. No. New wording does not erase the idea’s origin.
Task 4. Is “The organiser was careless” part of the sample’s summary? Answer. No. That is an added evaluation unsupported by the passage’s stated information.
Task 5. Must every paraphrase be shorter than the original? Answer. No. Its main job is faithful restatement; summary has the more explicit compression role.
CHAPTER 20 OF 20 · Compare, verify and practise
20. Reconnect restatement with transfer
Summary and paraphrase move meaning into a new account. They succeed when selection and new expression preserve the relationships that matter.
Read, map, restate and compare. Use that route to protect conditions, source status and uncertainty rather than treating fluent wording as proof of fidelity.
The next guide, Translation and Meaning Across Languages, examines another form of transfer: expressing meaning through a different language while attending to context and limits. Return to the whole English map for the complete series.
Reference Notes
The draft notice and restatement examples are original. For complementary guidance, see Purdue OWL’s Quoting, Paraphrasing, and Summarizing and Paraphrasing. Their quoted examples have not been reproduced here.
